For my free entry this week I decided to do Joshua form. It is called a bitter Haiku. I enjoyed creating our own format and decided to put those ideas to use. So here it goes:
malevolent love combined
as one distinct feeling
of relentless compassion.
I know this is not that bitter, but I tried.
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I really liked this. I don't think it's outright bitter but it kind of has a bitter undertone to it. I also liked that the entire thing was one complete sentence. I really liked the use of the word malevolent in the first line. Nice Job!
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